https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xea4Uokdzg
All the feedback that I have received has just been positive reassurance
that I have done a great job doing my pitches. I didn’t change much again from
my first two videos. I used my opportunity belief idea this time. I wasn't as motivational since the topic itself is not something that is to be happy about.
I really enjoyed your elevator pitch! I felt like it flowed very smoothly and seemed very natural as opposed to somebody just staring at you and reading lines off of a sheet of paper. It seemed personal and I can tell that this business idea is something that you are passionate about. If I had to say something that would make it better, I think a little more animation might improve it even more, but honestly your elevator pitch is very good as is. Well done
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